Based on the feedback we received from our audience when showing them our rough cut of our film opening we concluded some improvements we would act on to improve our film.
The first improvement we will do is to change our 'KMG' logo to another that fitted the horror genre because it appeared to the audience as a Sci-Fy logo.
Another improvement to our second logo, which did fit the horror genre is that the music ended quite abruptly so to improve this I will add a default transition to it making it fade out.
When the audience watched the first few moments of our film which consisted of establishing shots with ambiance sounds playing over it they noticed that these sounds ended also abruptly followed by new music playing. I am going to fade the ambiance sounds out and fade the new music in overlapping them both to make it sound better.
As we watched further into our film the audience also noticed a jump cut when he falls over, I am going to place a title in between these 2 shots so the jump cut would not be as noticeable.
Another thing we are going to do to our movie is record foley sounds of screaming, breathing and running and place over the footage and see what that sounds like as the audience suggested because there are no sounds in our film, only music.
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